Everything cycles from rocky waters to sunny shore. Very lovely poem!
Excellent reflections on the picture.
Yes, go for it, enjoy the peace at sea. A lovely poem.
Mona Lisa described in nautical metaphor. Don't know how you came up with the concept...but you have pulled it off very well. This struck me as very clever. Vb
You can borrow my serenity anytime laurie ;)
Thanks... I live my life in peace and serenity most of the time, but my muse is a different story.
Absolutely, she's worth it!!!
This is lovely. Beautifully metaphoric.
I enjoyed this! Thoughtful piece.
I like how you linked your words to the scene behind the figure. I would have never seen the water otherwise.A beautiful poem.
I see. I sea. This piece is most definately seaworthy!
Beautiful metaphor. I love anything about the sea, but would not have thought of this perspective to look and sea the Mona Lisa. I like it very much tho.
You have handled the extended metaphor very well.
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