Love the closing line "stained glass windows". Love the parallel between windows and eyes. Love the poem and it's flow (but must look up lachrymal!)
very interesting poem Laurie - I like the vitreous eyes and the closed mind (don't we all know a few of them)
Deceptively deep words. Nicely done.
I had to look up "vitreous." That's a good word!
Ooh, nice. Even if I don't know what' vitreous' is, either.: )
Thanks!Sorry... "vitreous" is glass-like.
the difference between closed minds and acceptance in just a few words. Very good.
Yes indeed. There are many tears behind closed stained glass windows! Time to open them.
I love vitreous eyes.Nice post.LisaInspiredbyLisa
Thought this was quite good. I saw this as a new, hopeful beginning...we don't know what caused it, but it feels like a good thing. Have to say , anyone who can work both vitreous and lachrymal into a coherent piece deserves a lot of credit! vb
Terrific! You've reached deep...
Acceptance is a powerful thing and does change outlook - making the world cheery again. Bravo!Anna :o]
Well spoken Laurie....it seems half of accepting is seeing the truth....:-)
Your words fall like drops on a window pane
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