Against the tangerine leaves
Plum sky silenced, turning
Twilight looms afraid
A cry of broken tails
Beneath the shadowed flock
Remnants of the fire
Like wind planets fallen
We lie beneath tomorrow’s smoke
Our love striding to meet again
Flying free we float as one
*Prompt inspirations: A Whirl of Wordling Sundays, Sunday Scribblings
forgotten rose petals
shadowed beneath a colorless void, pink
silk on pebbled memories
*Prompt inspiration: Poetic Bloomings
a wonderful blend of imagery...opening with the colors...the burning, smoke and still coming together nice....
Laurie, Tangerine leaves and plum sky provide a brilliant opening to your liaison. I love this piece. Thanks for joining the wordle crew.
Wow, these two pieces were like a mighty passionate roar followed by dancing tippy-toe words..the colours and petals skipped and shone..Jae
Great imagery - two good ones Laurie.
I love "Flying free we float as one." Beautiful images, Laurie.
Thank you so much.
Great work, Laurie.
Wonderful sensual imagery from the wordle words. Calm but with feelings felt, yet well hidden lending a sense of mystery overall.
Really like this one,
Nicely wordled words, Laurie.
Moving, and very well written.
Loved it, Laurie. Very colorful!
I love reading all the different poems with th same words. Great job. Thanks for visiting my site!
"flying free we float as one"
what a beautiful line
I love the way you've used colour in both of these.
Like the colours, Laurie!
"like wind planets fallen" love that line...this is gorgeous!
I like the plum sky and tangerine leaves...but I'm not sure I've seen a plum sky except in this poem...so maybe I see it now.
lovely, delicious imagery.
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