*Laurie Kolp Poetry*

Monday, September 12, 2011

the biting breeze carries
high-pitched voices;
gossip travels fast

@laurie kolp

Jinksy said...: Oo! That sounds harsh?! ♥; September 12, 2011 at 1:08 PM
Marian said...: yes, indeed! though i don't think i've ever described gossip as winsome :); September 12, 2011 at 1:17 PM
Laurie Kolp said...: Jinksy- The things I observe in the carpool lines!

Marian- Good point... I changed it to high-pitched. Thanks.; September 12, 2011 at 1:46 PM
Unknown said...: The juicier it is, the faster it travels!; September 12, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Reflections said...: Ouch... can really feel the sting in this one!; September 12, 2011 at 4:36 PM
Mary said...: Yes, gossip has a life of its own!; September 12, 2011 at 6:09 PM
Ed Pilolla said...: biting really is evocative for fast-traveling gossip. this is so strong.; September 12, 2011 at 9:32 PM
Susannah said...: Layers of meaning in this. Love the 'biting'. Nice writing.; September 13, 2011 at 5:45 AM