Monday, September 12, 2011

the biting breeze carries
high-pitched voices;
gossip travels fast

@laurie kolp

8 comments:

Jinksy said...

Oo! That sounds harsh?! ♥

Marian said...

yes, indeed! though i don't think i've ever described gossip as winsome :)

Laurie Kolp said...

Jinksy- The things I observe in the carpool lines!

Marian- Good point... I changed it to high-pitched. Thanks.

Eva Gallant said...

The juicier it is, the faster it travels!

Reflections said...

Ouch... can really feel the sting in this one!

Mary said...

Yes, gossip has a life of its own!

Ed Pilolla said...

biting really is evocative for fast-traveling gossip. this is so strong.

Susannah said...

Layers of meaning in this. Love the 'biting'. Nice writing.