Saturday, May 28, 2011

Serene Symphony

Image by Michael Maier, German surrealist
Melodic dreams
Heaven's serene symphony
Wash ashore these troubled times
Let mind, body, spirit unearth your fear
Hypnotic wings in harmony sing 
Fly on high transparency
You, me

@laurie kolp

{Prompt inspiration and image: Writer's Island}


Linda Jacobs said...

Love the shape of this poem! It's like it has wings!

anthonynorth said...

A great sense of the mystical in this. Lovely.

Anonymous said...

Pretty on the page, and pretty good poetry!

Elizabeth said...

Uplifting words. Thank you,


Anonymous said...

I like the shape of this; is it a particular form?

Laurie Kolp said...

Thank you... no particular form (that I'm aware of) it just came out that way.

Wayne Pitchko said...

I like the way it came out Laurie...thanks for sharing

Dave King said...

The final three lines clinch it for me.

Mary said...

Beautiful words, beautiful arrangement of them.

jabblog said...

This flows beautifully.

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

well done.
love the prompt image.

gsb3 said...

Enjoyed this one. Very ethereal, but realistic as well. And positive. Leaves you with a very good feeling about life and the universe. Thanks for posting.

Short Poems said...

Simply beautiful!
Shape Poems