Tuesday, January 24, 2012

A Tongue Twister?

He asked me if I'd ever
felt a tongue
outline my body from head
 to toe, enticing pleasure, warming
sizzle, moisture spreading, heartbeat
threading pulses that
drive you crazy 
and
I
said
no
~~
~~
~~
~
~
~
YES



 
@laurie kolp

Prompt inspiration: Poetry Jam (senses)

19 comments:

Brian Miller said...

haha...nice and sensual...whew...tingles...lol

Eva Gallant said...

Wow! Just a few words, but so hot!

Mary Mansfield said...

Holy cow Laurie! I think I might need a cold shower after that one. A very sexy poem!

Margaret said...

Sexy and humorous and leads one quite a vivid journey! Loved it.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Smooth talking weasel!

Daydreamertoo said...

Haha... Hottttt

Lolamouse said...

Wow. That woke me up!

Helen said...

Just where is this guy? Seriously sensual....

Carrie Burtt said...

He sounds like a true romantic....this is great Laurie!

Mary said...

Well, this definitely got my attention. Who has a fan?

Ginny Brannan said...

"...heartbeat
threading pulses that
drive you crazy"

Wonderfully worded and cleverly formated. Liked the addition of the ~ ~ ~ accentuates the subject well! Definitely sensual!

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Actually should be 'silver-tongued weasel'.

Heaven said...

sensual poem...i like it ~

Doctor FTSE said...

I like the use of typeface ~~ instead of words. Very expressive.

~ aN aSPiRiNg aLLitErATiOn ArTiSt ~ said...

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twinkly sparkles said...

Nicely done. I agree about the lines--adding so much to the sense and sensuality of the poem.

Very hot! Have we seen this side of you before?

I haven't been doing the Poetry Jam, but I am glad I stopped in to read and catch up.

Laurie Kolp said...

Thanks... I have written a few like this before. = )

Christine said...

sense-sational

Summer Rain said...

love the imagery and shape.