He asked me if I'd ever
felt a tongue
outline my body from head
to toe, enticing pleasure, warming
sizzle, moisture spreading, heartbeat
threading pulses that
drive you crazy
and
I
said
no
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YES
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YES
@laurie kolp
Prompt inspiration: Poetry Jam (senses)
19 comments:
haha...nice and sensual...whew...tingles...lol
Wow! Just a few words, but so hot!
Holy cow Laurie! I think I might need a cold shower after that one. A very sexy poem!
Sexy and humorous and leads one quite a vivid journey! Loved it.
Smooth talking weasel!
Haha... Hottttt
Wow. That woke me up!
Just where is this guy? Seriously sensual....
He sounds like a true romantic....this is great Laurie!
Well, this definitely got my attention. Who has a fan?
"...heartbeat
threading pulses that
drive you crazy"
Wonderfully worded and cleverly formated. Liked the addition of the ~ ~ ~ accentuates the subject well! Definitely sensual!
Actually should be 'silver-tongued weasel'.
sensual poem...i like it ~
I like the use of typeface ~~ instead of words. Very expressive.
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Nicely done. I agree about the lines--adding so much to the sense and sensuality of the poem.
Very hot! Have we seen this side of you before?
I haven't been doing the Poetry Jam, but I am glad I stopped in to read and catch up.
Thanks... I have written a few like this before. = )
sense-sational
love the imagery and shape.
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