Yum. I've been craving ice cream sundaes lately. Not the lame-o kind either. Real vanilla icecream with hot fudge sauce. Anyway, your poem goes right along with my vibes!
well you're making me hungry, and that's just cruel =). ive been craving some ice cream for some reason and this isn't helping. i like the concrete structure of this, very clever. enjoyed the read, and now i'm off to the store
Your verse depicts a nice picture form. It is a clever way of indicating the shape of the cone. It also shows the depleting nature of the ice cream inside. Great Laurie!
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Yummy! Short and sweet :-)
A word ice cream cone..so wonderful to linger on and enjoy..Jae
beautiful and fun.
I love it! I knew someone would do something unique! I love your view~
;D
A very cool twist! Love it :)
Yum. I've been craving ice cream sundaes lately. Not the lame-o kind either. Real vanilla icecream with hot fudge sauce. Anyway, your poem goes right along with my vibes!
nice...is that a shell...cool pic...and def would not mind an ice cream cone...they are much fun...smiles.
Your 'unique' poem is a fun, tasty treat!
Beautiful, Laurie. I love not only the arrangement but the tasty words. I can see the ice cream drip (almost).
Yummy! Filled with my favorite ice cream, too. Love this inspiration.
Delish!!!!
well you're making me hungry, and that's just cruel =). ive been craving some ice cream for some reason and this isn't helping. i like the concrete structure of this, very clever. enjoyed the read, and now i'm off to the store
Ooo Yummy... nice way you laid it out too, like the cone :)
I see it to....love this Laurie!
....but now I am hungry for icecream! :-)
Love it! But too tired to go to the store so this will be an unsatisfied longing!
Yummy!!!
Nice form and sweet words ~
a lovely take on this Laurie and totally unexpected ...
How delicious of you to connect that pretty shell to swirled ice cream! YUM!
Thank you all for your delicious comments.
How lovely! I absolutely adore sweet concrete poetry. <3
i love this vanilla treat...very clever take on the prompt
Love where you went with this!!!
PS .. word verification is 'cremas' how about that?
I've binged on your creativity and found it quite satisfying.
I like this Laurie, the words, the shape and the picture. Good package! I assume this is a photo of a blue bell seed?
the shaping is fun and hte content makes me hungry.
Hurrah! A poem with no black angst to spoil vanilla sweetness...
Your verse depicts a nice picture form. It is a clever way of indicating the shape of the cone. It also shows the depleting nature of the ice cream inside. Great Laurie!
Hank
Thank you all
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