Suzy invited me to the sun one day
We swam through Cool Whip as we played
Leap frog with peaches and mango
Jumping hoops of pear mandiango
Until the heat was too much to bare
So we stripped down to our underwear
And lo and behold I did discover
Fruit salad in secret places uncovered
@laurie kolp
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| My son's edible sun |
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19 comments:
Sheer delight on a frazzled Friday.
Can I come next time:)?
Bright spot of words and colour on a very cold January day to the north!
love it! mandiango!
Good one! And I want some of that edible sun!!!!
Yum Yum - sounds like a fun day!
Anna :o]
Oh, how gorgeous—your poem and your son's creation (I enlarged the photo to look at it closely) are both deliciously lovely, Laurie.
K
This is such a fun poem! I think swimming through Cool Whip would be very tasty!
Love it make so much more sense than my attempt too ...I also had a mango in mine ! thanks for the smiles x x x
Sounds delightful!
What fun! Makes me smile.
This is playful and a bit devious. Love it.
yummy!
I think my mind stripped thread.
There seem to be no departments in life for which fertile metaphors cannot be found in food - and vice versa. You are obviously unusually skilled in this. Enjoyable and VERY suggestive.
haha sounds like a fun place to be laurie...smiles..and fruit salad, yummy yummy...haha
sorry got your tweet this morning...may still play later today
I love the playful adventure of your words~
A delight! Sometimes it's just wonderful to let the words play.
Eww...almost like going to the beach and discovering sand in places you didn't know you had!!
Very clever, a fun read!!
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