Stop and look at the beauty
Unfolding before your eyes
Natural as the sun above
Flowering in Autumn's arms
Like a smiley face stamped
Over your heart with love
Winding yellow happiness
Every time you sneak a peek
Revealing who's in charge
@laurie kolp
Poetry inspiration: Poets United Thursday Think Tank
21 comments:
That was especially lovely and clever!
good one - a clever acrostic
I love you chose this form; it is gorgeous. I love the lines, "Flowering in Autumn's arms
Like a smiley face stamped
Over your heart with love
Winding yellow happiness"
Well Done~
Nice acrostic! I love sunflowers!
revealing who's in charge is a great landing. flowering in autumn's arms is gorgeous.
Great acrostic! I really like the ending.
I had to read this a few times--just because it makes me feel happy all over. It's a "feel good poem". :-)
And I love your wording, especially Flowering in Autumn's arms
Like a smiley face stamped
Over your heart with love.
Great work, Laurie.
Laurie, I love this. Indeed Someone greater than us humans is in charge!
Thanks everyone... sunflowers always make me happy.
Very creative with the sunflower letters...
I like that smiley face stamped... perfect description.
A sweet write, Laurie.
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/09/01/seek-the-son/
Laurie, I also loved the smiley face! I really enjoyed this poem.
Acrostics are fun - nicely done!
Beaufitul. They do remind us of smiles don't they!
Makes me happy and full of life and love.
Great peice
Blessings
Sunflowers are awesome creatures.
This one looks as if she is about to tell us a secret.
please stop by and weigh in on my
interview with cammila. Tx
sunflowers make me happy as well...nice acrostic...hope you have a lovely weekend...
Thanks... you, too.
So very true....beautiful writing Laurie! ;-)
Lovely verse!
you inspired me to write an acrostic. i even gave you credit on my blog.
http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/09/04/sunflower/
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